This poem is fourth in the anthology of the poems based on the five elements.
Please read the previous ones, if you haven’t.
Space–The Space element represents the sky, but inside our body, represents the exit points – like ears, nostrils, and mouth. According to our Hindu culture, once the soul exits the body after death it takes any of ten exists like ears, nostrils or mouth to exit the body.
“Even
After
All this time
The Sun never says to the Earth,
“You owe me.”
Look
What happens
With a love like that,
It lights the whole sky.”
― Hafiz
The spaces between us
and spaces within us
we are breathing each other
the boundless sky
where we let our dreams fly
face to face
within the hatchery of stars
it carries the fire
earth and water
and we feel
divine within us
The spaces between us
and spaces within us
the ten doors
our soul
makes the exit from
and becomes one
with the divine
The spaces between us
and spaces within us
boundless as our dreams
bright and spangled with
our hopes
you surround us
and encompass us
We are within you
and you are
within us.
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I’m a mother of a smart and energetic seven-year-old. I started expressing myself creatively since the last two years. Since then I have been continuously inspired by events in my life and around me which has helped me in penning my thoughts.
I’m an avid reader, loves to sing, an ardent lover of poetry and sometimes can scribble few lines too. Loves to dance in the rain, have an undying love for nature, can watch the beautiful sunset for hours. Love to kiss and hug my loved ones.
I have worked in the IT field for almost a decade as a manager, worked crazy hours and traveled around the world. In that busy schedule, I never got the time to creatively express my thoughts. Now every time I finish a poem, free verse anything it fills me with so much happiness and excitement and a feeling to have created something of my own. I’m planning to post at least one creation of mine weekly.
Lastly, a million thanks to all who visit, like or follow my tiny bits of creation.
Every time you do that, I get to know one more beautiful person in my life and get the chance to see their creation too.
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I was always fascinated by space. This was quite an enthralling read :’)
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Thanks Sulaiman. I love reading your posts too.They drip with romance and ecstasy
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Haha, that’s very kind of you to say. Thank you!
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You are welcome
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Beautiful Megha👍
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Thanks Ushnish
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You’re welcome 😊
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Reblogged this on The Militant Negro™.
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delightful to read, thanks so much 🙂
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Thanks so much Kate.
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my pleasure as I like your posts, you have real talent 🙂
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Thanks for such a compliment. I just try to scribble around.
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I doubt that as you share such wisdom and you have a very kind heart … they are what really matter 🙂
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Yes, I think we all have some kindness hidden in our hearts. Some knows about it and some don’t.
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we ALL have a limitless well of kindness deep within our hearts, some tap into it while others have layers of confusion clouding it!
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Yes so true Kate
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Beautiful!
Once I read on a post saying “we both (husband and wife) love each other so much that we never thought about space. Going further he said we enjoy everything together. We are not like the ones who say they need personal space”. Off course I disagree. And I had to write a post 😀 just to say that we all neeed space (inside or outside) to grow, even the plants do the same.
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Yes I agree before we are partners or spouses or any other role we undetake..we are a being and we need personal space
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Space has always fascinated me, especially the contrast between the space holding all the universe against the space in a cell. Space really is infinite, even in a cell, despite its walls. I love where your elemental poetry take me!
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Aww , now that is a compliment coming from a talented poet who can spin the space in his million verses.
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The compliment is deserve and would you look at that, a compliment for a compliment. If i was the blushing kind, I would be blushing, but I have to wait for sunrise and sunset (or a lot of running) 🙂
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haha..You are witty.I like that..Blush all you like…may the sun always finds you.
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Haha, thank you! 🙂
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