This poem is in continuation of the micro poetry of the same name. Read Origin here.
That sweet essence
those aromatic hues
encapsulating
me and my soul
where my desires
douse
and
are reborn
as they are
baptized in your love
stripped of all my sins
as my faults and scars are
slowly and surely erased
and
gives me a pure
beautiful clean slate
to rewrite the stories
of love and passion
those I have been waiting eternally
to spill on the
thin papyrus
Those thick fumes
of pure passion and desires
soaking me
as I drip
and drench
myself in you
forever
waiting for that first breath of my
life
my elixir
that is the precise spot
where your love stems
and my breaths
take birth.
–Megha
This post is in response to the daily prompt
Rivulet
Published by Megha's World
I’m a mother of a smart and energetic seven-year-old. I started expressing myself creatively since the last two years. Since then I have been continuously inspired by events in my life and around me which has helped me in penning my thoughts.
I’m an avid reader, loves to sing, an ardent lover of poetry and sometimes can scribble few lines too. Loves to dance in the rain, have an undying love for nature, can watch the beautiful sunset for hours. Love to kiss and hug my loved ones.
I have worked in the IT field for almost a decade as a manager, worked crazy hours and traveled around the world. In that busy schedule, I never got the time to creatively express my thoughts. Now every time I finish a poem, free verse anything it fills me with so much happiness and excitement and a feeling to have created something of my own. I’m planning to post at least one creation of mine weekly.
Lastly, a million thanks to all who visit, like or follow my tiny bits of creation.
Every time you do that, I get to know one more beautiful person in my life and get the chance to see their creation too.
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breathtaking …love it!!
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Thanks so much Ray for loving it.
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Simply beautiful, Megha! ❤
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Thanks Ana.An extension of my micro poetry.
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Yes I noticed that 😊 lovely!!
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I loved the flow of this. Beautiful!
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Thanks so much Sgeoil.
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You are very welcome.
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This is beautiful, Megha. Many of the posts related to the daily prompt can seem forced and uninspired, trying too hard to use the word and not to capture it’s meaning. You have approached this in a unique way in that you did not even use the word but rather expressed it’s essence. Lovely.
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Thanks so much for such a beautiful insight and getting the underlying emotion so well.Honest confession, this poem is an extension of the micro poetry but when I saw the prompt , I thought it resonates with it as well.Thanks again.
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I feel the flow of this, and may every waking moment bring out your love and joy.
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Thanks for such a kind wish and wishing you the same.
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Love this extension of the micro piece. The ebb and flow of desires is a constant one within the confines of love. Brilliant use of the prompt, too!
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Thanks for your beautiful words.Honestly speaking I wrote it yesterday around the extension of micro poetry but thought it suits the emotions of the prompt as well.
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You are kindly welcome. I knew you were working on this yesterday but it did fit the prompt, too, so kudos!
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Thank you so much.
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Always my pleasure!!
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Truly captivating. Such a lovely flow right from the beginning to the end. Lovely! 🙂
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Yes it is one of those poems we read in a single flow..thanks for getting the emotion.You always get it right
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It’s because you always write in such a way that it has nowhere else to go, but the heart. 🙂
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Aww..I’m gonna save this comment for ever.So sweet of you to think about me like that
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Beautiful continuation! ☺
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Thanks.Glad you liked it.
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My pleasure! ☺
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Dipped in love – I could feel the warmth. Well done
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Thanks
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You are welcome
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Beautiful piece! “soaking me as I drip and drench myself in you forever” My take away!
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Thanks Warren for pointing out the lines.Always a pleasure to read your feedback.
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A pleasure to read your words!
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Thanks so much Warren for your kind words.
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You’re welcome, check out my post Alphabet Soup, I think you will like it!
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Yes will do
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Reblogged this on Megha's World.
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You totally knocked it out of the park with this one Megha!
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Thanks so much dear.Glad you liked it so much.
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I really, really did.
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wonderful.. loved the flow and the emotions and use of words
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Thanks for your kind words and the time you spent on the blog,
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Reblogged this on johncoyote and commented:
Amazing poetry by a talented writer.
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Thanks John for the kind share
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Amazing poetry dear Megha.
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Thanks John
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You are welcome Megha.
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Beautiful
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Gorgeous 😍 love this
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Thanks so much Jude.
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Always my deepest pleasure
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