Perched at the top
but still looking down
with those eyes
seeking love and solace
gazing from emptiness to nothing
I’m the single soul left in this metropolis
where I can see every one
but everyone is blind to see me
Those crimson tinge skies
carrying the smell of the dusk
laced with the dancing specks of dust
in the wee hours of the morning
I stand here alone
connected and yet disconnected to
the world all around me
They all said ” rush to the top”
for all the bleared eyes to see
blinded by my desires
and on my fours like a lizard
I rose to the top
gasping for breath
moved hurriedly
But here I’m perched firmly
at the pinnacle of the success
broken and crumbled
with my stooping shoulders
carrying the burden
of the souls
I crushed and crumbled
to reach here
for the world to see.
Published by Megha's World
I’m a mother of a smart and energetic seven-year-old. I started expressing myself creatively since the last two years. Since then I have been continuously inspired by events in my life and around me which has helped me in penning my thoughts.
I’m an avid reader, loves to sing, an ardent lover of poetry and sometimes can scribble few lines too. Loves to dance in the rain, have an undying love for nature, can watch the beautiful sunset for hours. Love to kiss and hug my loved ones.
I have worked in the IT field for almost a decade as a manager, worked crazy hours and traveled around the world. In that busy schedule, I never got the time to creatively express my thoughts. Now every time I finish a poem, free verse anything it fills me with so much happiness and excitement and a feeling to have created something of my own. I’m planning to post at least one creation of mine weekly.
Lastly, a million thanks to all who visit, like or follow my tiny bits of creation.
Every time you do that, I get to know one more beautiful person in my life and get the chance to see their creation too.
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This is deep. In the mad rush of achieving materialistic pleasures and hollow success we forget to live a life. Beautifully penned 🌸
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Thanks Shantanu.This just got featured on Visual Verse after I posted on my blog..Yay!!!!
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Wow. You’re going places 😊
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This is the second time.I got published in Jan too.Have few more good news to share.May be offline.
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Sure thing. Will ping you
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Thanks.I’m so happy today.sorry to say it again and again.
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Good for you 👍
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Thanks Shantanu 🙂
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Great poem and message and congrats on the publications! 🙂
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Thanks so much Carly.
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No problem.
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Reblogged this on The Militant Negro™.
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Such a beautiful written depiction of reaching the top. The image one is left with at the end is vivid as I picture all those crushed and crumbled souls sacrifice for the speaker’s success in reaching the pinnacle. Beautiful poetry!
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Thanks.You always majey poetry more beautiful with your words.Much appreciated.
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You are kindly welcome. And thank you, for again, humbling me with your beautiful response!
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Powerful piece, and also too much of a reality! Well said!
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Thanks Warren for reading
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Wonderful and powerful… well done, Megha
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Thanks Ana for such wonderful comment.
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Reblogged this on Megha's World.
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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As they say, it’s lonely at the top.
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It is infact if you don’t care about the people who helped you reach there
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Exactly! Very well written.
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Great
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Thanks Haroon.Hope you are staying safe
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I love this Megha! Deep reflections on what happens we succeed…
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Thanks so much Devereaux
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