I say,

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I’m in entwined with you
you ask me how
I say,
as the vines embrace the
strong arms of the tree
for their love and sustenance
I say,
I’m inseparable from you
you ask me how
I say,
as the
clouds hiding the
bouts of rain in them
I’m submerged in you
you ask me how
I say,
as the rivers gushing and rushing
towards oceans
to dwell in their forever
I rise from you and fall in you
You ask me how
I say,
as the fragrance of the flower
which soothes and pacify us
and still is inseparable
I’m born out of you
You ask me how
I say
as the two halves of a soul
sliced and living separately
till we make it one.

Photo by Cristian Newman on Unsplash

This post is in response to the daily prompt Elaborate

 

89 thoughts on “I say,

  1. If this poem does not get a 1000 likes then the readers are idiots. And I mean it Megha. It’s a fabulous romantic piece and needs to be advertised everywhere. If this is how a loving relationship can be then the world will be transformed.

    Regards, CP

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      1. You are right about it. So why did I comment? Why did I pressed on the like button? Because it touched me. Likes and comments are the proof of being touched. So I am right when I said if there’s not much likes then readers either didn’t see it on web or they are idiots to ignore it.

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      2. Oh ok…Thanks for the clarification and for the sharing.Means a lot.Also, I have written my share of love poetry, you can check on my site under the category “love”, if you fancy.

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      3. I will. Do you write articles? Then I would like to see them so that I can add you to my team as one of my writers on Candles Online. Pay a visit to know what’s we are upto…

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      1. Aww don’t be sorry I was just kidding. You do me more favor by reading them and commenting on them.Thats the most I can ask for.i really appreciate all your comments.

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  2. Hi Megha! I am Sona and I came across this beautiful post of yours on The Reluctant Poet’s Blog. Infact, I have to say he sent me to your blog and had many words to praise u. I read this post and somehow got inspired to write my own post today . It is called DO YOU, MY LOVE. I think it was the repeated use of the words- I SAY, here that got my attention and gave me the inspiration to write. I hope u will check out my blog. I am a month old on wordpress and love to discover blogs that I enjoy. Really hoping to exploring more of your posts. Love.

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