The dimming street lights
cast a long shadow
you are taking long strides
to keep the demons away
from catching up to you
You are hiding your soul
saving it
Not ready to make a deal with
with the devil yet
the flickering light in your heart
is giving you way
While the night engulfs the
shadows away
It’s the beginning of the nightfall
the night is dense
You can’t track your guiding star
The shadows are catching up
You can only run this far.
You can knock all you want
There won’t be any
help you can find
the voyeurs in the street
would love to hear you
screaming alive.
Your hurtful pleads
can only go so far
the lights are dimming
voices are dying down
you can only run this far.
Photo by Paul Garaizar on Unsplash
This post is in response to the daily prompt Dim
Published by Megha's World
I’m a mother of a smart and energetic seven-year-old. I started expressing myself creatively since the last two years. Since then I have been continuously inspired by events in my life and around me which has helped me in penning my thoughts.
I’m an avid reader, loves to sing, an ardent lover of poetry and sometimes can scribble few lines too. Loves to dance in the rain, have an undying love for nature, can watch the beautiful sunset for hours. Love to kiss and hug my loved ones.
I have worked in the IT field for almost a decade as a manager, worked crazy hours and traveled around the world. In that busy schedule, I never got the time to creatively express my thoughts. Now every time I finish a poem, free verse anything it fills me with so much happiness and excitement and a feeling to have created something of my own. I’m planning to post at least one creation of mine weekly.
Lastly, a million thanks to all who visit, like or follow my tiny bits of creation.
Every time you do that, I get to know one more beautiful person in my life and get the chance to see their creation too.
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Keen observation and a will to write gives us a unique insight, but the soft touch of a woman’s mind brings tranquility that would be hard to achieve by men. Simplicity, smooth flow with a touch of magic can be the key……!
This is your second poem I have read, and I find them both intoxicating and inspiring!
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Thanks for reading my works intently. Means a lot. Welcome to my blog and hope you will not be dissapointed.
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Beautiful poem with a sense of melancholy running through it.
On a different note, the second “with” in these lines below, is it intentional?
“Not ready to make a deal with
with the devil yet”
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Oh no, it is a mistake thanks for pointing it out. Sometimes these mistakes creep in when I write and post with paying too much attention.
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That happens to all of us.
I thought it may have some other meaning but could make no sense of it, so asked.
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Thanks again.Will fix it in a bit.
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Oh yes! So damn good!
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Kunal, you took the word right out of my fingers!
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Thanks Kunal and Wendi.Your comments make my day.
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🙂 isn’t the truth beautiful!
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Yes it is.
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🙂
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Thanks so much Kunal.
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I walk along streetlights and never imagine light that shines from it could amplify an idea on paper. Lovely write from a great inspiration
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Thanks so much.I guess we can find inspiration anywhere.
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That’s exactly my point… inspiration changes everything
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Yes..you are right.You read poems with such amazing metaphors and winder how it slipped past you.
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C’mon Megha, there you go again, inspiration comes when it comes…anything can inspire. I’m glad you were geared up enough to write something so beautiful is all.
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Yes..I always consider this as a blessing..so see things with different perspective
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It is a blessing…and a blessing to others who read
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Exactly.
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This is really nice. Kudos
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Thanks for your kind read.
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The intensity of this piece is spot on. I can almost feel the shadows casting their darkness over me. Excellent writing my dear! 🤗
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Thanks so much Becky.This was written when WP used to give us dailty challenges with the prompts.Oh How I miss them
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I miss them so much too. I used to look so forward to them, that I would set my alarm clock so I didn’t miss it. LOL! 😊
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Hahaha..yes me too.
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You change the way we look at things in life.I will always remember this beautiful piece whenever I will walk under street light now💕💕💕
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Thanks so much Yasmin.Dont this is what poets do have a different perspective from us
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Yes☺
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This is wonderful
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Thanks Luna for the read
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Beautiful!
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Brilliantly beautiful!❤
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Thanks so much Richa
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You can run but never hide. A lovely take on the prompt. Total justice
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Thanks so much
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My pleasure
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Street lights …………….. by Megha Sood
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Excellent! Especially the lines
You are hiding your soul
saving it
Not ready to make a deal with
with the devil yet
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Thanks so much Reena for your kind words and for sharing it
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