“One of the greatest regrets in life is being what others would want you to be, rather than being yourself.”
― Shannon L. Alder
A thousand sweet praises
I can listen sweetly
and keep forgetting them
the next day I rise
Only one insult from you
hurled at me
from your sullen mouth
breaks and shakes me
shatter me
into million pieces
It gnaws at my insides
There is no beginning
and there is no end
the pain seems to
wriggle its way
all around me
making a tight knot
I’m unable to open
The incessant choking
and my raspy breath
is frantically looking for a
a breeze of fresh air
How is it that I
live with all my flaws
with my head held high
but a single insult
I can’t seem to bear
it kills me alive.
Beautifully penned, loved the flow. Yes one insult sometimes can break your spirits, more specially if it comes from my husband despite his constant appreciations, one word hurled at me and there you go:). Great poem, will read it again
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Spoken like a true wife and I so agree to it. But I guess it happens with all the poeple we love intently we cannot stand any rejection from them.Thannk Tanya for reading.
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very true agreed. My pleasure!
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This is so emotional. Very well portrayed and so relatable
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Thanks so much Jaya
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How brilliantly you have said it. We often forget the praise heaped on us and only remember one single insult . Thanks for sharing.
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Yes so true..such is the human nature we like to treasure our bad memories.
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This is such a beauty. Sometimes that one insult breaks the camel’s back
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You bet.That last straw.Its not unusual that so many people relate to it.Its hard to find empathy these days
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True that my friend
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I love the story this tells! Very talented!
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Beautiful writing. I’ve had that person whose opinion would make or unmake my day
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Yes, how indeed, it is always the small things that undo us.
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Yes so true Paul.
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