Flawed ( Micro poetry)
Published by Megha's World
I’m a mother of a smart and energetic seven-year-old. I started expressing myself creatively since the last two years. Since then I have been continuously inspired by events in my life and around me which has helped me in penning my thoughts. I’m an avid reader, loves to sing, an ardent lover of poetry and sometimes can scribble few lines too. Loves to dance in the rain, have an undying love for nature, can watch the beautiful sunset for hours. Love to kiss and hug my loved ones. I have worked in the IT field for almost a decade as a manager, worked crazy hours and traveled around the world. In that busy schedule, I never got the time to creatively express my thoughts. Now every time I finish a poem, free verse anything it fills me with so much happiness and excitement and a feeling to have created something of my own. I’m planning to post at least one creation of mine weekly. Lastly, a million thanks to all who visit, like or follow my tiny bits of creation. Every time you do that, I get to know one more beautiful person in my life and get the chance to see their creation too. View all posts by Megha's World
I loved the imagery of clock frozen in time in pain with no hands… so symbolic. You can take mundane and elevate them to heightened emotions. Great work Megha!
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Thanks so much Tanya.This came out after writing a poem based on the same underlying emotion.
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Well done!!
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Thanks Tanya.I have yet to catch up to your posts.
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That’s fine dear, taking out time with kids is bit easy!
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Yes,then I have writing deadlines, submission and because of the festival season..I am teaching a small skit to kids at my son’s school.
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Oh yes I can understand so much work to be done!
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A mother work never ends.Right?
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Oh never it’s just 24/7 I just fed my daughter, now I’ll get her into night clothes rock for almost an hour and she will sleep
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All the best.May she sleeps easily.
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Let’s hope and keep fingers crossed!
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I love your micro poems! Simple, crisp and so profound!❤
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Thanks so much Richa.I saw the image and it just came to my mind
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Amazing… loved the similitude
we all frozen in time n space
in pain with no love n solace
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Thanks so much Rohit for reading and sharing your thoughts
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Amazing imagination 👏
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Thanks so much Sushma.
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Oh the imagery in this is amazing. Thank you for sharing it.
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Thanks Sarah.Glad you liked it.
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Wow wow wow. Simply brilliant
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Thanks so much Shantanu.Three Wow in the morning..a good start I must say
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Haha. I really enjoyed reading it
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Thanks.Yes your comment shows.
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😊🌸
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Have a good day!!
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You too
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This is beautiful!
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Thanks so muhc Mel for the read and the follow.Much appreciated.
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Enjoying it!
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I love the last lines of the poem!
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Thanks Jaya.
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Beautifully penned!
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Thanks Christine
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What elevation! Sad, wistful …
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Great creativity here to take us into the mind of a clock.
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Reblogged this on Megha's World.
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This is epic. Nothing else needs to be said. 🙂
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Thanks so much for sharing.
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