I’m so happy and thrilled to share the poem written by my 8-year-old son, Siddharth. He wrote this as part of the poetry week in his school. Please read the poem and share your views. I will pass on your feedback to him.
The skies are purple, the sun is blue, the clouds are yellow, and the river is brown.
It’s like we’re in an alien world; everything’s the same except the color.
It’s like ultraviolet rays are approaching your eyes and you can’t believe your eyes, forget about the cartoons.
It’s like you’ve stepped into a mysterious portal in the middle of nowhere and it is impossible to arrive in the modern world; your destiny.
There might be much more than color, maybe all that’s left is to open the door.
and think you are dreaming.
–Siddharth Sood
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I’m a mother of a smart and energetic seven-year-old. I started expressing myself creatively since the last two years. Since then I have been continuously inspired by events in my life and around me which has helped me in penning my thoughts.
I’m an avid reader, loves to sing, an ardent lover of poetry and sometimes can scribble few lines too. Loves to dance in the rain, have an undying love for nature, can watch the beautiful sunset for hours. Love to kiss and hug my loved ones.
I have worked in the IT field for almost a decade as a manager, worked crazy hours and traveled around the world. In that busy schedule, I never got the time to creatively express my thoughts. Now every time I finish a poem, free verse anything it fills me with so much happiness and excitement and a feeling to have created something of my own. I’m planning to post at least one creation of mine weekly.
Lastly, a million thanks to all who visit, like or follow my tiny bits of creation.
Every time you do that, I get to know one more beautiful person in my life and get the chance to see their creation too.
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Wow. Give him my love
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Thanks so much.Yes I will.
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The young man is a poet! Great work on this.
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Thanks so much.He will be thrilled to hear from someone like you.
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You’re more than welcome. It makes me happy to see a young person embrace the power of words.
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very well done, you are quite the poet! 🙂
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Thanks Wendi.He will be happy to know.
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🙂
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Ah, Megha, this is beautiful. What a talented boy. Like mother like son.
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Thanks so much G.Im surprised myself.He likes writing but never has written a poem before.He wrote two this week one for mother’s Day and second this one.
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You should be so proud of him. Give him my love!
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Yes I am. He will so thrilled to know your feedback.
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🙂
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Very good God bless him
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Thanks so much for your blessing.
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🙂💟
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Wow. 8, you say? He’s a natural.
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Yes I guess. His first poem. He surprised me.
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Son is like mom.. Very beautifully written.
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Thank so much Ashish.
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He’s a talented poet. He might have a career in writing.
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Aww that’s the nice thing to say.He is very driven in maths and robotics.
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Like mother like son – this is so beautifully done – the thought process is so clear at such a tender age
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Yes he surprised me too.I’m happy to read this.
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You should be so proud
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Yes I’m
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👍
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I absolutely love this, so beautifully written! Congratulations 🎉 to young man!
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Aww thanks so much Yonnie.He will be happy to hear this
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Please do let him know! 😊
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You should be proud!
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I’m , so much
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😊🌸💜
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Can imagine ur little hero!!! Read ur post 2 times. 😊😊❤
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Thanks so much Sunaina.Glad to hear that
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😊😊😊❤❤❤❤❤
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Seeing the world through your son’s eyes was very refreshing. It is so lovely how children view the world.
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Yes, kids opens up a new persoective for things around us.Thanks for your kind read, Jaya.
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Like you he painted a delightfully creative picture that took us right there … he has a sense of adventure so he will do very well ❤
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Thanks for saying that. He will be so happy to know that. He has good writing skills for his age but this is his first poem.
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then it must be in his DNA … seriously that’s advanced thinking for an 8 yo!
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haha..who knows..I’m just happy he wrote a poem.Thanks Kate for all your love.I’ll passon your wishes to him.
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and a big hug!
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Excellent poem! It is amazing what images can be found, so rich in color and meaning.
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Thanks so much.He will be delighted to know
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Must be the DNA! Wonderful freeform, and I love the underpinning urge to get into life and without duality.
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Thanks so much Paul.He would be delighted to know.
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Great, glad you put that up.
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Thanks so much.
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Pleasure Megha
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your son is an amazing writer i must say….he definitely needs to write more.:))
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He has got decet writing skills. He writes poem when he wants to. He will be happy to know you kind words.
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Reblogged this on Megha's World and commented:
A beautiful memory that makes my heart swell in pride.
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Nice bit of poetry from someone so young there Megha!!!! Well Done!
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Thanks so much. I will definitely let him know.
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