Remembrance ( Micro poetry)


33 thoughts on “Remembrance ( Micro poetry)

  1. Beautiful poem.
    Were I to tighten it thus:
    Like dried rose
    pressed between pages of
    poetry book,
    I have saved your memories
    stolen from time.
    would it improve or diminish it.
    I like your ‘that’, “the”, “my” flying off in different directions but my instinct is to excise them. What does this say about our different experiences and approaches to poetry? What can we learn from each other about the subtle use of little words?….

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