Inefficient

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I fail miserably to guard my self
my heart
my emotions
my eyes
which gives away
every single feeling
every moment
I spent;
I try so hard to disguise
I try to stop
those fleeting memories
of the time spent
near the corners of my smile
near those dimpled bends;
Nobody blames you
for turning my world
upside down
drowning me with your love
and painting my heart
in the darkest shade of crimson
you can possibly found;
All I hear is the word of advice
a hush
a whisper
to safeguard my precious heart
they say
they all talk in unison
and declare me
inefficient.
 This post is in response to the daily prompt  Inefficient
Photo by Edward Cisneros on Unsplash

 

36 thoughts on “Inefficient

  1. Relatable and filled with beautiful imagery. I especially enjoyed

    of the time spent
    near the corners of my smile
    near those dimpled bends

    Beautifully written!

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  2. There is old song in Marathi language similar to mining of this poem

    किती जिवाला राखायाच राखलं, राया तुम्ही जाळ्यात पाखरू टाकलं. ( please try translation with help of Google translate)

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