This poem is in continuation of my micro poetry. Read Salvation.

As I dance till my feet bleed
the sweat pour out of my body
as tears of my soul
I dance till I drop dead
As I sing from my heart
till my voice turns coarse and harsh
and every word, every syllable
touches and turn my
wounds to gold
so pure
I sing till I go mute
As I write my poetry
till my emotions bleed on the
papers
turns it into crimson red
cuts the soul of my readers
till they cry from every pore
I write till my fingers bleed no more
As I open my heart
for you
and let you in
and turn in upside down
shred into bits and pieces
to make a comfy pillow to
rest your head on it
and sleep on it
till all your nightmares
leave your soul likeβ¦
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What a beautiful expression of feelings! “touches and turn my
wounds to gold
so pure
I sing till I go mute”
Superb!
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Thanks so much for appreciating it.
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you are welcome!
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I’ve very moved by this … pure emotion; so vivid. As I was reading I saw the blood seeping slowly into porous paper. Being blotted away from the source. Great stuff!
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Thanks so much Diana for your heart felt comment,when you read my poetry with such love it fills me with so much love
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My dear friend – it is always a joy to interact with you and read your work. You are so prolific I do struggle to keep up….but your blog will always be here and someday…. π β€
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You visits to my blog always leave a trail to your heart.You read my pieces with so much love.and the feeling is mutual..I wait for your posts.
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I’m booking a flight, running to your home,. giving you a big hug …. haha! You are an utter sweetheart and I feel and reciprocate the warmth …always π
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Wish I could have known you last summer..I booked a flight went to your place and came back without meeting you.
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My dear Megha
You understand it to write with the ink of your heart and move the reader like waves
on the sea of inner feelings. Bravo, dear friend π
All good wishes
Didi
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Aha..such a beautiful comment Didi..
One day I’ll compile all your comments into a poem.
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Welcome, dear Megha π and thank you very much for your nice intention… π
Have a great time, my friend
Didi
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Thanks Didi.
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What emotions and what love and what you. Intense
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Oh my my..what comments and you.
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ππΈyou are welcome. You wrote it beautifully
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Thanks so much Shantanu πΊπΊ
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My pleasure
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I wanna dance, sing and write like youπβ€π
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Aha thank you Yasmin
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Your poetry has the Midas touch. Love the depth of feelings in this. Dance, sing and write from an open heart – bravo!
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I’m deeply humbled by your words, always and ever.Thanks so much Inky.
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You are always welcome, Megha.
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