“Yes, there is joy, fulfillment and companionship—but the loneliness of the soul in its appalling self-consciousness is horrible and overpowering.”
—Sylvia Plath
I hate you for replacing my
loneliness with your balmy presence
With my soliloquy
with your sweet symphonies
With my moments of monotonous emotions
with a rainbow laced with
Love
Desire
Passion
And everything in between
My eternal silences
With your giggles and laughter
filling and seeping in the gaps in between
where you have secretly lightened the
deep dark corners of my heart
with your moonlight presence
Playing hide and seek
With your smile
as bright as crackling fireworks
With your aura
your illuminating presence
consuming my darkness from within
I hate you for taking away the
sorrow which was mine
my mind seeded
with my forlorn thoughts
And filled it with love
which is yours
Oh! I hate you
for loving me so deeply.
–Megha
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I’m a mother of a smart and energetic seven-year-old. I started expressing myself creatively since the last two years. Since then I have been continuously inspired by events in my life and around me which has helped me in penning my thoughts.
I’m an avid reader, loves to sing, an ardent lover of poetry and sometimes can scribble few lines too. Loves to dance in the rain, have an undying love for nature, can watch the beautiful sunset for hours. Love to kiss and hug my loved ones.
I have worked in the IT field for almost a decade as a manager, worked crazy hours and traveled around the world. In that busy schedule, I never got the time to creatively express my thoughts. Now every time I finish a poem, free verse anything it fills me with so much happiness and excitement and a feeling to have created something of my own. I’m planning to post at least one creation of mine weekly.
Lastly, a million thanks to all who visit, like or follow my tiny bits of creation.
Every time you do that, I get to know one more beautiful person in my life and get the chance to see their creation too.
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Such a unique concept for describing the importance and impact of love. I guess we ‘hate’ it because once we have it there is always the fear of losing it. But, as the old adage says: better to have loved and lost, right? Really love the emphasis on the most important words: love, desire, passion and deeply (which describes the first three). Awesome writing!! I love it!
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Thanks for describing in your beautiful words and I hate it when every time you get to close to the feeling with which i have written the poem.haha
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And I hate having to constantly read everything you write because I love it so darn much 🙂 🙂 You are most welcome!!!
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haha..see that sets the record.We both “hate” each other.haha
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Hahahahaha…. yep! There it is in digital ink. You are so witty!
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Thanks.I know that..haha
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Welcome! Haha, and confident, too 🙂
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Reblogged this on The Militant Negro™.
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Thanks dear friend for reblogging it.
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Lovely, Megha! ❤
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Thanks Penny.Glad you liked it.
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Nicely done. How a heart perceives stories in the most lovable way for all the adulations it receives. 👍
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Thanks Shantanu for your beautiful comment.Thanks for reading.
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Always my pleasure
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Thanks,I wanted to portray the feeling with which we sometimes hate people for loving us so deeply and replacing our silence with their thoughts.
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And it came out well 👍
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Thanks for reading.
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😊
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Are you in different time zone??
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😊at home. Had some work
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Thought so..cause it’s way passed bed time..
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Yeah
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A wonderful piece! When a love can transform your life; deeply!
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Yes ,The power of transformation love carries.
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Wow, does this mean love is harder than hate – or tougher than hate? Thought provoking stuff, beautifully expressed.
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Thanks Soundflyer for your insight.Indeed love is harder than hate as it overcomes the feeling of loneliness we have been holding onto and hate when loves comes and conquers it.
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I very much enjoyed this poem. The narrow line between love and hate, the powerful nature of each emotion is fuel for poetic expression. You poem was a balm in itself here on a weather warning of rain and strong wind Sunday!
There are other perspectives on this subject. Love as mind control.
The constant expression of “Love” can be a form of control by “loving” the behaviours the “lover” wants to see from the “loved” and as a result a resentment can grow within the loved about being “loved” too well, that feeling perhaps even becoming hatred.
Is it what happens between the love tokens, words and acts that establish the balance within a relationship and indicate the strength of that love? Your poem answers those questions, until the dark shadow at the end…Sylvia Plath would have given you a Like, I feel.
However, expectations of being loved are also potentially tools of manipulation. Love gently.
Thank you again for your poetry.
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Wow I’m overwhelmed at your deep insight into my poem.I’m so honored that you have taken you precious time to give my poem a read and then comparing me to Sylvia Plath is a feather in the cap.I’m no where near to the writings. of that fabulous women.
Yes, As you have correctly mentioned the juxtaposition of love and hate in relationship have been a poetic fuel for centuries.Thanks again for reading and commenting.
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Reblogged this on Voyage des Mots and commented:
This is a love poem with a late kick
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Thanks so much Christopher for the kind reblog. Much appreciated.
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The insight has been learnt the hard way, but a valuable lesson.
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Yes absolutely.
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the paradox of passion, nicely stated
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Thanks Paul. yes it is.
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It’s so deep and heart touching . Loved it 😄❤️
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Thanks so much for that comment.Love is deep indeed.
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet and commented:
Come and enjoy this delightful Love Poem!!!
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Thanks so much Chuck.
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Oh so beautiful, My Dear!! A perfect capture of the transforming nature of love! This was really great! The old – I Love You, I Hate You! Billissimo, Megha!!!
This hit such a familiar chord in me but couldn’t put my finger on it until I realized you have joined some prestigious company with this post – it reminded me of the song in My Fair Lady – I’ve Grown Accustomed To Your Face.
xoxo
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Awww., I’m so humbled to read your precious comments.You absolutely got the essence of the poem right and yes it is the classic I hate you, I love you thing. Thanks so much Chuck.You made my day!!
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You are way too Sweet, My Dear! Once in awhile I guess right. LOL!! I’m so happy I made your day! Thank makes my day!!!! Nice to have shared Glee!!! Once you know true love you can never really be happy without it in your life!!! Like Chocolate – If you’ve never had it, you never miss it – but once you’ve had it, you miss it! Ha!
LAH
xoxoxo
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Haha..yes I’m definitely missing chocolate right now
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Beautiful piece here, Megha !
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I love this stanza
“With your giggles and laughter
filling and seeping in the gaps in between
where you have secretly lightened the
deep dark corners of my heart
with your moonlight presence”
The imagery is very vivid. Great work!
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Thanks for pointing out the lines from the poem.Much appreciated.
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You are welcome!
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Amazing piece, Megha. There are those that find solitude in loneliness and to lose that can be an emotional rollercoaster. You addressed this in a beautifully poetic fashion.
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Thanks Eugenia for reading is so intently.Yes, dont we all find peace in solitude at times.
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Reblogged this on Megha's World.
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