This poem is third in the anthology of poems based on the five elements. Please read the others if you haven’t yet.
Air–The Air element represents the air, wind, cyclones, and tornadoes. But in our body, it comprises the breathing pattern and the gases moving inside our body.
“Your omnipresence is marvelous!
I breathe and you enter me.
I exhale and enter into you.”
― Kamand Kojouri
As we Inhale you
and exhale
the pain out
with every heaving chest
you make your
existence feels aloud
Without you,
we are gasping, choking
and our existence
fades away into oblivion
Without you we just a pile
of muscle
and bone
you make us all human
When you move gently
and grazes a lovers cheek
the poetry flows
out of a poet’s lips
and that’s how
a lover speaks
You enrage
and brings the wrath
to us
the cyclone and the tornadoes
stirs every iota of life in us
You are a harbinger
of that sweet
aroma
the nature hides
you are only sign
that within us a soul resides.
You work in tandem with water
to carry our love through
Air, my sweet air
what would we do
without you?
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I’m a mother of a smart and energetic seven-year-old. I started expressing myself creatively since the last two years. Since then I have been continuously inspired by events in my life and around me which has helped me in penning my thoughts.
I’m an avid reader, loves to sing, an ardent lover of poetry and sometimes can scribble few lines too. Loves to dance in the rain, have an undying love for nature, can watch the beautiful sunset for hours. Love to kiss and hug my loved ones.
I have worked in the IT field for almost a decade as a manager, worked crazy hours and traveled around the world. In that busy schedule, I never got the time to creatively express my thoughts. Now every time I finish a poem, free verse anything it fills me with so much happiness and excitement and a feeling to have created something of my own. I’m planning to post at least one creation of mine weekly.
Lastly, a million thanks to all who visit, like or follow my tiny bits of creation.
Every time you do that, I get to know one more beautiful person in my life and get the chance to see their creation too.
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Ah…how poetically you have penned the different facets of Air. It had all aspects of emotions so beautifully woven into it. This idea was like a whiff of fresh air to me Megha 💖
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Aww Thanks Radhika. I so look forward to you reading my posts and commenting.You really have explained all the emotions I had while writing this. Love and hugs to you , my friend.
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Keep mesmerising us with your words. They just flow out so eloquently Megha!!
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Thanks so much Radhika.I have so much to learn.
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Can’t agree more..the words just flow out of Megha..fluid and sublime.
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Thanks a lot. Compliments like these make my day.
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Splendid job on this poem Commander. 😀 Salute. 😀 Now I am truly amazed of how you come up with this poems and write them. 😀 Just, great. 😀
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Thanks so much.oh I’m honored to be a commander.
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;D
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That’s a beautiful and poetic way to describe the importance of one of the elements.
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Thanks Winnie.
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You’re welcome Megha
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It’s beautiful! You just gave air a life all over again:)
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Oh that is a beautiful compliment. Thanks Jamie.
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I feel like you have beautified the air 😊
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Thanks Tia.One of the reasons for our existence should have some beauty in it.
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Reblogged this on The Militant Negro™.
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Another element we can not live without. Love your approach to this.
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Thanks so much.My earlier attempts at nature and its elements.
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You are kindly welcome! It is a treat to go back and read your earlier work. In this business, writing can change overnight so it is always enlightening to see how a writer grows.
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Yes Its true for all of us.
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Yes, it is!
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I don’t know how you do this but all i can say is you are doing great.
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Thanks for your kind words.Hope you read all the 5 poems in that anthology.
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