We, humans, have the proclivity to shut down emotionally in a state of emotional crisis.We all feel that we are safeguarding ourselves from all the pain and angst by keeping the help at bay and downplaying the hurt we are going through. It takes a lot of courage to open to someone and to share your deep emotional thoughts with people around us. We all feel very vulnerable by doing so, but are we really keeping us safe this way?
Is loneliness your companion which makes you feel complete Is tiredness your friend ache and pains gives you hand Is the emptiness in your life makes you fill the void with all the empty memories Are you safeguarding all your truth so you don't need a friend Is the bitterness in your voice keep the enemies at bay Is the cowardness in your way of life keep the harm away Is the sourness in the relationships armor your heart and keeps it safe Is the ugliness in the ways of life keeps the lovers at arms' length Is the foulness in your voice shuts down the path to your soul keeps you away from the ghouls Has the proclivity towards broken faith keeps you from looking straight into his eyes stops from your faith being restored Are your wings broken so you can't fly to strange new lands Have you made yourself tone-deaf so you can't be swayed by the music of your land How are you keeping yourself safe these days?
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This post is in response to the daily prompt Proclivity
beautiful poem!
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Thanks. Much appreciated.
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I feel as if you read my mind. I truly love this. 🙂
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Aww thanks Beckie but as I said though it’s difficult to open ourselves to others ,we should always try doing it.
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It does take some practice and confidence. 🙂
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Yes I totally agree with you..it took me years to finally agree to that.I always thought I could handle everything by myself.
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Are you safeguarding all your truth
so you don’t need a friend
Had to read this line through several times. There are some home truths I need to confront head on.
George
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I’m glad my poem spoke to you.
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“Is loneliness your companion
which makes you feel complete” so perfectly u wrote this… 🙂
I guess we falsely perceive that best companion is our loneliness and so we become vulnerable to open before any friends…
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Yes exactly. Its not easy to open up to people in our lives we feel very vulnerable and threatened and clamp up ourselves.
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That is why your poem is beautiful…it just tells us what we try to ingnore… 🙂
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Thanks.
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I loved this poem..
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Thanks for the kind words.
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This was lovely and truly spoke to me. Thank you.
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Thanks Kimberly.
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The irony is by keeping ourselves safe we tend to dig a pit of emotional trench for ourselves where the mire engulfs us part by part!
We try to control our emotions and dominate them but them but how is it possible to breathe without oxygen and survive without emotions!?
Beautifully written!❤
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Thanks Charu. Very true. It summarizes the underlying thought for my poem.
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Pleasure!
Would love to have your reviews sometime😇
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Lovely take! ❤
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Thanks.
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very nice. i love it 🙂
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